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[PS4/5] Neil:我们最初最后剧情不是这么设计的 置顶采访翻译

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发表于 2020-6-23 12:18 | 显示全部楼层
言嘉 发表于 2020-6-23 12:58
这个桥段在很多JRPG里用过

事实上JRPG里常见的手法之一就是

草你这么一说好像确实跟夜露和朝阳很像,这么一改看起来确实好接受多了而且你还成功引发了已经AFK半年多的我的朝阳PTSD
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:22 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
这整活,越看越像冈达
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:26 | 显示全部楼层
看完以后觉得极度不适。

QNMB白左圣母
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:28 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 cjcjason 于 2020-6-23 12:37 编辑

E3预告片是乔尔救了艾莉,说“我不能让你一个人去”,正作改成了杰西补个预告片地址:视频地址
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:29 | 显示全部楼层
nesrelax 发表于 2020-6-23 12:18
草你这么一说好像确实跟夜露和朝阳很像,这么一改看起来确实好接受多了而且你还成功引发了已经AFK ...

要整活这种复仇连锁的剧本还得指望日本编剧,白左们就是逊啦
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:35 | 显示全部楼层
6x6z6w 发表于 2020-6-23 10:00
打了俩小时字,三个人的对话基本都翻译了,LZ行行好放到顶楼吧虽然可能有不少错误的地方

看了一下原文:
Gross: Ellie’s got survivor’s guilt, she’s got PTSD, and she’s haunted by what she lost.

你这里翻成了“幸存者偏差”,似乎有点……幸存者愧疚、幸存者综合征什么的都可以啊
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:39 | 显示全部楼层
确实是这个问题,大量垄断美国创作权利的精英阶层都是这个水平,大抵就是日本轻小说作者的水平,
拥有同样的空中楼阁般的世界观,家长里短级别的格局,还和小李老师一样有着要教化众生的觉悟,认为所有反对他们的都是落后的文盲农民主义,
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:39 | 显示全部楼层
所以我一直就觉得,这部作品的故事就是很普通。如果它不是TLOU2,如果neil大先辈这个访谈真的是毫无保留的话,那单论故事,我觉得根本就没什么值得讨论的。所有角色,所有情节桥段,在叙事功能上的意图太明显,想要表达的东西太刻意而浅显,就和秦川说的一样,都是美剧里出现无数遍了的套路。要讨论无休止的暴力和纷争,讨论仇恨与宽恕,远有高明的多,表达的也更优秀的游戏或文艺作品。
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:40 | 显示全部楼层
草, Neil大先辈这个弱智写TLOU一代的时候居然还能被管住没写成屎, TLOU一代才是真正的《奇迹》吧
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:42 | 显示全部楼层
pgain2004 发表于 2020-6-23 12:35
看了一下原文:

你这里翻成了“幸存者偏差”,似乎有点……幸存者愧疚、幸存者综合征什么的都可以啊 ...

改了,偏差应该是bias,记错了
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发表于 2020-6-23 12:42 | 显示全部楼层
bad_alloc 发表于 2020-06-23 12:40:28
草, Neil大先辈这个弱智写TLOU一代的时候居然还能被管住没写成屎, TLOU一代才是真正的《奇迹》吧 ...
现在来看一代是真的奇迹

  -- 来自 有消息提醒的 Stage1官方 iOS客户端
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:18 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:22 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 6x6z6w 于 2020-6-23 13:24 编辑
PENTAX-DA 发表于 2020-6-23 13:18
补充了很重要的资料,希望可以引用译文。

之前我在想如果继续分析的话,会不会有给neil这傻逼洗地的感觉 ...

没问题尽管用
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:24 | 显示全部楼层
cjcjason 发表于 2020-6-23 12:28
E3预告片是乔尔救了艾莉,说“我不能让你一个人去”,正作改成了杰西补个预告片地址 ...

现在这预告片看得我想举报
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:26 | 显示全部楼层
6x6z6w 发表于 2020-6-23 10:00
打了俩小时字,三个人的对话基本都翻译了,LZ行行好放到顶楼吧虽然可能有不少错误的地方
当玩家操纵的角色不能和玩家的意愿重合,并且游戏不断让玩家做出他们不想做的行动时会发生很有意思的事情,比起普通的玩家和角色重合的消极性玩法,玩家会对角色做出的决定表现出不一样的反应
There’s something interesting that happens when you’re not in alignment with the character and the game makes you do something that you don’t want to do — you wrestle with those decisions in a different way than you would be able to in a passive medium

Passive medium这里应该是指电影之类的被动性接受的媒介吧
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:27 | 显示全部楼层
竜破斬 发表于 2020-6-23 13:26
Passive medium这里应该是指电影之类的被动性接受的媒介吧

noted,感谢指正
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:28 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Zak 于 2020-6-23 13:31 编辑
cjcjason 发表于 2020-6-23 12:28
E3预告片是乔尔救了艾莉,说“我不能让你一个人去”,正作改成了杰西补个预告片地址 ...

这里是我游戏过程中第一个喷了的点

其实如果去看TLOU2最早的预告片,也是类似,老乔走进到处是尸体的房间问艾莉啥情况,艾莉说我要杀光他们每个人,现在回头看,都不知道当时这剧本想好没
https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1Bs411Y73F

虽然都可以强行解释成艾莉在脑补在做梦

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发表于 2020-6-23 13:32 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 如来神掌 于 2020-6-23 13:35 编辑

这哥们是不是混过嬉皮士运动啊?
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:33 | 显示全部楼层
sgvvvv 发表于 2020-6-23 09:33
他们真不觉得那些闪回插入的地方很唐突吗

三流美剧不就喜欢这种硬转的桥段
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:38 | 显示全部楼层
nesrelax 发表于 2020-6-23 09:21
思考了一下,在艾比的流程里让他因为某些原因干掉了张三的亲人。然后最后艾莉找到艾比的时候发现艾比已经被 ...

无限之住人的某前段剧情
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:38 | 显示全部楼层
sgvvvv 发表于 2020-6-23 09:33
他们真不觉得那些闪回插入的地方很唐突吗

我本来还想着闪回甚至套娃闪回是不是时间不够了,只能这么安排,没想到编剧自己感觉如此良好…
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:38 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
期待neil先辈梦说出什么有建设性的意图的我还是过于天真了,还是那么浅显,感觉不到什么成体系的深刻思辨
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发表于 2020-6-23 13:47 | 显示全部楼层
还是那句,最后主旨落在艾莉对乔尔的愧疚的话,艾比线根本不需要
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:07 | 显示全部楼层
还能让Joel叫Sarah......wdnmd
我真怀疑TLOU的大纲都是Neil找人代笔的了
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:10 | 显示全部楼层
笑死我了,这样的访谈在微博上还是秦王先发出来给大家看的,现在原文有了,译文也有了

国内这帮媒体人呢?不来深度探究一下?
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:14 | 显示全部楼层
我现在的感觉就是,我的同理心已经几乎达到了想要原谅顽皮狗的等级,然而我还是没办法原谅阿比
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:39 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:40 | 显示全部楼层
The story of “The Last Us Part II” is almost perfectly symmetrical. From the opening and closing shots of the guitar, to the accordion-like structure, the rhymes between life in Jackson and the stadium in Seattle, the museum and the aquarium, Ellie’s love of space versus Abby’s fear of heights, and so on. Can you talk about how you wanted the two halves of the game to reflect each other?

TLOU P2的故事几乎完美对称,从首尾呼应的吉他近景,到折叠式结构:杰克逊的生活与西雅图的体育馆,博物馆与水族馆,艾丽对太空的爱与艾比对高处的恐惧等等。能谈谈你是希望这两半如何映射对方的吗?


Neil Druckmann: With the first game, the exciting thing was role-reversal: You’re playing as this archetypal hero for a while and then at a certain point we flip it and you play as Ellie. Seeing how well that worked was so much of the inspiration here, and when we decided to make a game about empathy we knew we had to double down on that feeling — to structure the entire thing around getting you to connect [with unexpected characters]. You’re already connected to Ellie and Joel from “The Last of Us,” so we put them through a very tragic event, give you one look at a quest for revenge, and then shift to Abby in order to tell a mirror story of redemption that follows the person who — by killing Joel and avenging her father — has already accomplished what Ellie is trying to do, and is struggling to come to grips with it. We were trying to find those parallels you’re talking about, and to do so in a way where it’s not on the nose but it’s still showing you how these characters — under different circumstances — could’ve been friends.

Why have players control Abby for a bit in Jackson before Joel’s murder?
为什么要让玩家在乔尔被杀前先在杰克逊操控艾比玩一小段流程?

Halley Gross: We wanted the opportunity to build empathy for her from the start, and the most effective way we can do that is to have you walking in her shoes, spending time with her, seeing what makes her vulnerable, seeing what makes her scared. We get that she’s scared of heights, we get that she has a soft spot for Owen and is upset about his romantic life, we get that there are intense stakes that might drive those two people apart. We wanted to inform all of that without you understanding that she’s the prototypical “antagonist.”

These games are famous for how they engage with the player’s agency and sense of control. In “The Last of Us,” our alignment with Joel compels us to justify his actions as he murders innocent people to protect Ellie. In “Part II,” it feels as if the characters are trying to wrest control back from us. We fight Ellie, but Abby makes the decision to walk away. We fight Abby, but Ellie chooses to spare her life.
Druckmann: I think the ending of “The Last of Us” worked for a lot of people because of how in the beginning of the game we did a lot to put you in alignment with Joel, and to make you care for Ellie, and because we delayed Joel making the choice to take care of Ellie for a while — people like Tess keep making that choice for him. We knew that some people were not going to be on board with Joel’s decision at the end of the game, but we tried to make it so that even if you’re not in alignment with him by the time you got there, we’ve hinted at what he’s capable of so much that you’re still on board for the ride. There’s something interesting that happens when you’re not in alignment with the character and the game makes you do something that you don’t want to do — you wrestle with those decisions in a different way than you would be able to in a passive medium.

Many players — and most parents — might have understood Joel’s decision at the end of the first game, but “The Last of Us Part II” finds that Ellie herself is struggling to make sense of it. It seems like she doesn’t get all the way there until after the fight with Abby in Santa Barbara.
Druckmann: Joel has made this decision for Ellie, and now she has to deal with the consequences of that choice. But again I’m not putting a judgment on it, because we do what we feel is right. And for Joel, the decision to choose Ellie over the vaccine was pretty consistent with his character. He’s the same guy from the prologue of the first game — when he refuses to pick up another family as he and Sarah are driving out of Austin — all the way to the end. He’s willing to do whatever it takes to protect his tribe.

The game’s biggest plot twist is a subtle tweak in perspective, as we learn that Ellie has known the truth of what Joel did the whole time, and chose to seek revenge against his killers anyway. That information drives a deeper wedge between Ellie and the player.
Gross: Ellie’s got survivor’s guilt, she’s got PTSD, and she’s haunted by what she lost. She’s haunted by what Abby took away from her, and also — we come to realize — she’s haunted by what happened to her relationship with Joel after he told her the truth and she was so hurt by it. By piecing those details out it allows us to be with this internal character who isn’t much of a sharer, and it allows us to feel those memories coming back to her as she progresses through the narrative. It also progressively contextualizes what’s driving her. At first you think it’s just “fuck those people, they killed my father figure,” but then you realize “well, how much does she feel culpable in this? How much does she feel like she took something away from Joel?”
Druckmann: There was a functional reason for those flashbacks, too. We knew we weren’t going to spend a lot of time with Joel on the front end of the game, so we needed to insert these moments to keep reminding you why Ellie is on this journey in the first place. But we didn’t want to just have flashbacks that had nothing but sweetness — it felt like their relationship had to progress and couldn’t stay static.
Gross: This whole game is about the consequences of the choices that we make, and to do flashbacks that didn’t unpack the consequences of Joel’s choice and how it became this festering secret between he and Ellie that was dividing them and splitting them in two… that would have done a disservice to our theme.
Druckmann: I remember the fear of how much people loved the ending of the first game because of how ambiguous it is. For years people have been debating “Does Ellie know Joel is lying to him? Does she not know? Does she know he’s lying but she’s willing to let it go because of how much she loves him?” And it turns out that it’s kind of all of those things. We wanted with each flashback to show that at first Ellie’s in denial about it, and then it’s this thing that’s hanging over her relationship with Joel, and then she’s starting to suspect something, and then she thinks she thought she could let go but she can’t and it’s eating away at her until finally it blows up.
Each step of the way, we wanted you to think that Ellie’s relationship with Joel ended on a different note. You think “Joel died thinking Ellie hates him!” and then at the very end of the game we reveal something different with that last beat. Structuring those flashbacks was a process.Initially, they were all over the place, out of order, and so much of the writing work that Halley was really good at was untangling all of that and simplifying it.

The structure you settled on — especially with that very last flashback — makes the game feel like it’s the story of Ellie painfully coming to the point where she understands why Joel saved her, and is able to forgive him.
Gross: I think that’s right, and I also think it took her two years to come to the place where she could even consider embracing forgiveness with Joel. Ellie’s path to forgiving Abby is by far a much harder journey, though. Abby has wronged her in the deepest of ways. Right when she says, “OK, I’m ready for the challenge of forgiving Joel,” it’s like no, your challenge is now going to be escalated in a way that could lead to your own destruction and the destruction of the people you love, and are you going to be able to get there in time?

And she gets there just in the nick of time. She travels all the way to Santa Barbara just to let Abby live — to save her life, even. Abby’s decision to heed Lev’s caution and spare Ellie is similarly abrupt but understandable. Were you nervous about selling those key moments?
Druckmann: There are so many emotional parts of the game that for a long time didn’t land, and every time it’s so daunting to make them work. So often it’s just the iterative process of creation and cutting out a bunch of stuff that we realized wasn’t necessary. What comes to mind right now is Joel’s death. In the first edit of that scene, you felt nothing. Ellie’s being held down and Joel’s looking at her and we had this idea of like, “Oh man Joel’s brain is so fucked up at that moment that the only word that’s coming out of his mouth is his daughter’s name, ‘Sarah.'” It felt powerful, but then Troy [Baker] — to his credit — was like, “I don’t think he should say anything.” We shot both versions, and Troy was right. The scene was stronger without it.
Gross: We used to have five days in Seattle for each girl instead of three.
Druckmann: There was a whole side story where Ellie went to the Seraphite island, and we had so much more to say about the Seraphites and Ellie’s journey there and she’s going through like the different layers of Hell and she still keeps going forward.
Gross: Joel had a girlfriend. The ending was different.
Druckmann: In the farm sequence, you can find an entry in Ellie’s journal where she writes about killing this boar and how it makes her feel — we shot cut-scenes for that. There was a whole playable sequence of her hunting down a boar and it was awesome, but we felt that for pacing and production purposes it was just better to remove it. Art was done, and Ashley [Johnson] gave a great performance of how she kills this boar and everything.

Ellie getting revenge on the boar who scared the shit out of her and also me at the museum.
Gross: That’s why the boar is there! That was originally going to be a deer, but we had this boar and the boar was great.
Druckmann: And sometimes it’s about what you add in. The whole idea of putting in a flash of Joel playing guitar while Abby is drowning Ellie… for a long time people were confused why Ellie spares Abby. And we were like “What’s the right amount where we can just hint at something, but not be so explicit that it could only mean this one thing?” Because each decision that people make is complex. And it was really the editorial team who was like “What if we did this?” We thought it might be hokey, but it worked.

Let’s talk about why Ellie goes to Santa Barbara in the first place, and the heartbreaking decision to leave her idyllic life with Dina and the baby. Does she still care about killing Abby at that point, or is it more that she needs absolution from Joel of some kind?
Gross: I think those two things are synonymous. To my mind, when she’s leaving the farm it almost isn’t about Abby at that point so much as it’s about “I literally cannot survive if I don’t try and handle what’s going on because this PTSD is just getting worse, I’m losing control, I feel like I’m at risk to my family, and I have to hope that there’s an answer on the other side because I don’t know how to live with this. If I stay here it’s **.” It’s more a conversation about mental health and surviving than it is justice for Abby or even seeking Joel. It’s just like “I don’t know how to be a person anymore.”
Druckmann: We tried to deconstruct Ellie’s relationship with violence versus Joel’s relationship with violence. With Joel, it’s very practical and pragmatic. He doesn’t find much pleasure or hatred in killing, he’s more indifferent, it’s just a function of how he survives. With Ellie — Malcolm Gladwell talks about this — it’s the concept of “the culture of honor.” Her ego is so intertwined with being wrong, and she has to make it right, and she believes she can’t come to rest until she makes it right.

Ellie leaves behind the guitar that Joel gives her. I assume it’s not just because Abby chewed off two of the fingers Ellie needs to make chords.
Gross: For me, Ellie is putting the idea of Joel to bed. She’s burying him respectfully at that point and moving on to a new chapter in her life, whatever that might be. But he’s in the rear-view mirror when she leaves the house at the end.
Druckmann: Whatever we say here ultimately doesn’t matter. Everything you need to understand the story is in the game, and whatever players take from it… their interpretation is right. At least until if we ever make another game and then we can argue about it then. But personally, to me, Ellie is finally able to get past her ego and this whole obsession. We’d often use the metaphor of talking about her revenge as a drug and Ellie as a kind of drug addict, and that’s ultimately why Dina left. She’s like “this girl’s hit bottom and it’s still not enough, I can’t help her anymore.”
Also I should say that for more than 50 percent of the production, Ellie used to kill Abby at the end. Which gave a whole different kind of feel to the ending, and then another character would have to stop the cycle of violence. But at some point, through our conversations about Yara and Lev, we came to the realization that it wasn’t as honest to Ellie’s character that way. Deep down inside there’s goodness there. Hopefully she can go forward and build her life.

Is there any chance she can reconcile with Dina?
Gross: In spite of all that Ellie’s been through, I want her to find love. And support, and a community, and a sense of safety. Whether or not that’s possible in the “Last of Us” universe given how hostile it is and how you can always lose people and the fragility of everything, I’m not sure. But I want that for her. Also that baby is damn cute.

It’s probably too soon to discuss “The Last of Us Part III,” but let’s discuss “The Last of Us Part III.”

虽然可能早了点,来谈谈下一章吧。

Druckmann: I’ll be a little vague and cagey as you can expect, but I think the test for whether or not to make a “Part III” would have to be a similar test to what we did with “Part II.” With the first game there were no expectations and it was like we could do anything. But now that we’ve established certain characters and themes and processes, it felt like to justify making a “Part II” we had to do something not that fans would just be comfortable with, but do something that would match the emotional core we found in the first game. And without that, there’d be no reason to do a “Part III.” Finding it with the sequel was much harder than it was with the first game, and going forward it would be exponentially harder to justify going back to that world and finding a way to vary things up. There’s already so many things you’ve seen about the backstory, about how the outbreak happens, so we’d really have to figure out how to create a new experience that matches the emotional impact of these stories and I don’t know what that is. Currently.
前面部分翻译可能太简略了点,例如第二问……但可以理解。

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发表于 2020-6-23 14:43 | 显示全部楼层
sad6504 发表于 2020-6-23 08:49
所以neil这人就这点料了,不知道机核看到这个有啥感想

机核看到就道歉了呢
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汤圆です 发表于 2020-6-23 07:57
路人甲之子:当年就是你不由分说的杀了我娘,我今天就要和你玩大众高尔夫

艾莉:等等,冤冤相报何 ...

...还真有这么拍的。当初张艺谋拍的那啥,不就是高手杀到秦王面前,结果王曰:“寡人悟到了~剑法的最高境界,包容一切,那便是不杀,便是和平。!”结果沦为笑柄......
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:49 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 JoelBirch 于 2020-6-23 14:51 编辑

好像记错了,编辑
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发表于 2020-6-23 14:55 | 显示全部楼层
neil大先辈真的是一脸自我良好,现在已经不能叫他巨魔了罢。
这么喜欢按着玩家的头输入理念的话就有多远滚多远了,吐了
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发表于 2020-6-23 15:14 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 ChrisSnake 于 2020-6-23 15:28 编辑

艾莉屠了一个基地的人都是为了美好的生活 只是杀到艾比这刚好杀累了
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最好不说 发表于 2020-6-23 12:03
隔壁有人翻了tlou2“终极限定版”附赠的导演寄语

"当你所爱的人遭受残酷而暴虐的对待时, 你会怎么做? 会不 ...

游戏里,艾比在基地里碰过一个路人甲对话"借给你的<基督山伯爵>看的如何了?"
估计neil特别想改大仲马的结局,基督山为了老情人自杀成功那样喂屎比较符合这段旅途
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发表于 2020-6-23 15:30 | 显示全部楼层
说白了就是恶心玩家呗.
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发表于 2020-6-23 15:38 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
言嘉 发表于 2020-6-23 11:58
这个桥段在很多JRPG里用过

事实上JRPG里常见的手法之一就是

我想到无印P5了
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发表于 2020-6-23 15:43 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
Zak 发表于 2020-6-23 13:28
这里是我游戏过程中第一个喷了的点

其实如果去看TLOU2最早的预告片,也是类似,老乔走进到处是尸体的房间 ...

我猜最初设定的是三妹死掉了,艾莉带上乔尔去复仇。
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发表于 2020-6-23 15:43 | 显示全部楼层
我觉得我还是喜欢《基督山伯爵》
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